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My cousin offered herself to be my personal slut

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This is a story about the acts of “taboo” that my cousin sister and I were involved in during her visit with parents at our home during holidays.

As I came out of the shower, I saw my 5 feet 4 inches tall cousin opening the door to walk out of the house in a sheer handkerchief wrapped around her waist. It was barely covering her clits and was unable to veil her soft plump tush. At first, I thought she wasn’t wearing anything underneath that piece of cloth but I was wrong as she voluntarily revealed her pink G-string later that night. As for the top, her chubby full breasts were covered, or rather revealed, by a black fishnet. Since she doesn’t wear such stimulating pieces of clothes at her own place, the way she was behaving that night when nobody was home, made it clear that she had this idea of tease in front of me before they arrived our home during her holidays. This made me wonder if she was waiting for me to get out of the shower so she could start exploring her daring nude adventures.
The incident above took place almost three years ago when she was just below 18 and I was 30 years old. It was the month of November and it was quite cold. As she opened the door, I asked her from behind, “Where are you going?”
She replied without looking back at me, “I’m right here on our apartment’s corridor”.
I didn’t want to intrude on her choice of clothes, so rather I suggested her to put on some clothes because it was cold outside the house. She didn’t reply anything and left the door ajar as she started strolling on the corridor. It was 7pm and the apartment’s elevators remain quite busy during this time of the evening. As much as it was exciting to see her slowly walking near the elevators without a care, or so she appeared, there was this lingering fear of her getting caught by our self-righteous residents of our apartment building. I believe she knew that and was very aware of what she was doing.
I asked her with a casual look on my face, “Did you ever wear these clothes before?”
She gave a wide smile and shook her head after which she replied, “Well, I’ve never put on the fishnet because I never had the chance before. But I did experience wearing this G-string panty once when I was trying to do a dare with my boyfriend. We’re in the same class.”
Her last few words made me realize how much she had grown up in the past few years. I wasn’t surprised to know that she too was into such nude dare adventures as I was once when I was a teenager, and to some degree, I still am. That feeling of rush while trying not to get caught without a single piece of article on your bare skin is something that can’t be explained. It can only be experienced through your own sensations. It is pretty much like spiritual enlightenment. One can’t explain it to others because there are no words to describe that state of bliss.
I took a seat on the stairs next to our door. I was curious to know all about it. My next question to her was, “Where did you do the dare?”
“In my school, just outside the washrooms”, she replied. Then she went back in and brought her phone to show me the recording of her dare in school. She said she made her boyfriend record it because she wanted to masturbate together with him while watching the same video during the next few days before their high school was over. She innocently said, “Since we don’t get a chance to record such videos in school, we took the full advantage that particular day as most of the students were staying home in order to prepare for the final exams.”
We both were seated on the stairs looking at the video while keeping our eyes and ears open at the same time. Getting caught with my almost naked underage cousin wouldn’t be a pleasant experience. I was left agape after watching the video. She was taking instructions like a submissive slave from her boyfriend. Both of them entered the boys’ washroom. As they expected, nobody was there. Before they could even enter the toilet cabin, she started taking off her shirt in a desperate manner. She wasn’t wearing any bra. As I looked at her face at that moment, she paused the video and replied with a shy smile, “I always take off the bra after coming to school. It is far more comfortable that way. Besides, it feels more pleasurable when he caresses my boobs and squeezes them tight.” She finished her sentence with a giggle.
She resumed playing it. She brought a selfie stick that day in school specifically for the reason of recording a dare video. After dropping her white school shirt right where she was standing, she asked her boyfriend to command her and she will do as he says. So he asked her to go to the washroom’s door topless and stand there for 30 seconds. He didn’t instruct her to take off her knee-length skirt but she did it anyway. After that, she only had her shoes and a G-string underwear on her. She walked back to the door and stood there by spreading out her legs. The instruction for her was to take off the G-string and shove it up her ass hole. She needed some help of her boyfriend with that. She writhed and moaned during the entire process of pushing that piece of underwear. They couldn’t push it all the way in. Half of it was hanging out of her ass hole. After it was done, she took off her shoes and socks and without waiting for the next set of instructions, she walked out of the washroom in a slow careful manner, looked around and saw a few first or second grade kids laughing and playing at a distance. She came back to wash her face when out of nowhere, three second graders entered the washroom boisterously. Both of them were shocked. Her boyfriend was fully dressed but she was totally bare with just a piece of cloth sticking out of her ass. Without appearing embarrassed or shocked, she kept washing her face as well as her butt cheeks. The kids were a little surprised to see her there as it was a boys’ washroom. She looked at them and said that she got dirty while playing and now she has to change all of her clothes. They looked towards the shirt and the skirt that were lying there. One of them replied, “But these look pretty clean.”
She appeared flustered and looked straight into the camera that was recording this entire incident. Her boyfriend intervened and said, “It’s because she washed them and dried them up. Now she can wear them after washing her body.”
The kids went about their own business without caring much about the reason she was standing naked in there. When those three kids were taking the piss, her boyfriend stood behind her at the sink and started pushing in the rest of the piece that was hanging out her ass while holding the selfie stick with the other, and as he did that, she started moaning again with a little wimping sound. There was still some of the cloth that was visible from her rear when the kids started with their questions again after getting done with toilet.
One of them asked, “How did that cloth get inside you?”
On hearing this question, both of them laughed. Her boyfriend replied, “We were just playing and trying to see if she can hide the underwear inside her.”
“Cool. Can I pull it out?” asked another.
My cousin and her boyfriend looked at each other looking perplexed at this situation. Her boyfriend replied, “Only if you won’t tell anybody.”
All three of them accepted the deal.
Then the kid who first asked about the panty, went close to her while the other two kept an eye to see if somebody’s coming after being asked by her boyfriend. She was facing towards them at this time. She turned around with some hesitation and let the kid come forward near her tush. But whatever part of that panty was still visible a while ago, got sucked in and went between her plump butt cheeks. The kid was trying to get a hold of that cloth in order to pull it out but was unable to do so. So she had to bend down with locked knees and stretch both side of her ass with both the hands so that whatever little part of that panty was visible, didn’t get lost inside her plump butt cheeks. While doing that, she looked into the camera and said with a laughter, “I never imagined a day would come when some kid in school will be pulling panties off my ass hole.”
The article came out and she seemed to take a sigh of relief. Also hoping that the kids will now leave them alone. But more was yet to come. The rest of the two also insisted on doing the same. Funnily enough, both my cousin and her boyfriend had to comply with their blackmailing. Her boyfriend shoved it in two more times for the kids to fulfill their wish. After this adventure was over, she got dressed up without putting on the G-string this time.
I remained speechless for a few seconds after watching the video. Then she said, “I am looking to open an account on pornhub and similar porn websites after by next birthday. So I’m trying to make some risky exhibitionist videos because I’m not into other kinds of porn to be honest. Exhibitionism stimulates me and gets me wet just by thinking about it.”
I asked her, “How many dares did you perform so far?”
“Only once in school. The video that you’ve watched. And almost got caught while trying to film another on my own”, she replied excitingly as she realized that I’m showing some interest in her teenage adventures.
“Was it at home or school?” I asked again finding it hard to get hold of my curiosity to know more about the other side of her.
She replied, “In the bus. It was my first time. Just a few days before I tried it with my boyfriend. I brought a cucumber from home before leaving for school that day just for this reason. I was in the last seat alone and found a window of opportunity to insert that thing up by butt. I had some practice at home the night before that, but doing it while filming yourself and keeping an eye out at the same time in a moving school bus is pretty hard.”
“So did you go through it?” I asked as my curiosity was getting the best of me.
“Somehow I did,” she replied with another one of her trademark giggle. “I had some moisturizer with me. So I lathered the cucumber with it and carefully pushed it up my ass. Thankfully, the sound of the bus engine and some vehicles outside drowned out my moaning sounds. By the time it was completely inside of me, I was already home.”
I threw another question with some shock, “The whole cucumber you say?”
She giggled again and replied, “It was a small one, so I could take it all in. It wasn’t easy though. So I got off the bus feeling like a brick was stuffed inside of me. I walked slowly towards my house and after dropping my bag on the floor, went straight into the washroom to film myself getting that cucumber out of my ass. Here’s the video of that.” She opened another file on her phone where I witnessed the whole thing. It was mind blowing to see someone you know so well do something like this and was not ashamed to share it with her cousin brother.
I was starting to feel that she is more fascinated with ass than with her clits. So I asked her, “It’s totally clear that you love to watch porn. At least exhibitionist porn videos as you said. It seems like you are more fascinated with ass. Did you ever insert anything into your vagina?”
“No I didn’t. I don’t want to shove anything foreign in that part of my body before getting married,” was her reply.
“So you mean to say you are still a virgin?”
“Yes I am. My boyfriend asked me to make love with him before, but the time and place is never quite right for that. Besides, I wouldn’t let him fuck me because I’m not sure who I will end up marrying after a few years. I want to save myself until that day.”
Now I was starting to get her point of view that was pretty similar to mine. I told her, “So basically you want to remain a virgin for the coming years while experiencing the kinks and fantasies of nude dare.”
“Absolutely!” she exclaimed feeling relieved that I get the way she thinks. At this moment, I noticed her left arm move slightly backward as I was sitting next to her right. “Sometimes I want to feel like a dirty shameless slut but without letting people know about it.”
I reminded her, “But your face will be visible on those videos that you will upload on pornhub etc.”
“Don’t worry, I’ll blur it”, she laughed after that reply. And as she finished saying those words, her black see-through fishnet top that was barely in place to start with, fell off her chest and onto her lap. She didn’t look down because she knew it fell as she was the one who dropped it. She gave a smile that looked mischievous. Then she got up without picking up the top, went further up the stairs to the next floor.
“Be careful,” I warned her. The lights of the corridor were on, so I was a bit worried about that as people from the nearby residences outside our apartment building might get a peek of her little adventure with me as she took off the tiny handkerchief that was wrapped around her waist, now totally naked except for the G-string. She walked around that corridor for a minute or so. Then she decided to take it a level higher. She took off the G-string too and climbed up to the next floor above the one where she took her waistwrap off. At this point, I was getting a bit angry with her because it wasn’t the right time for exhibitionism as people are awake and moving up and down the elevators. But I guess that is the whole point of exhibitionist dares. To take it to the next level.
Finally she came down after we stayed out and roamed the corridors for five minutes. She picked up the top and handkerchief while coming down the stairs. I was fully dressed because I wasn’t sure how she might react if I propose to get half naked and perform the same acts with her. As we went into our house with not a single piece of article to cover her body, she looked at me and asked me to join her as her and my parents were about to arrive after a couple of hours from a little trip to a relative’s place. I was silent for a while after which I replied with a smile, “Not a bad idea. Finally, I have a partner in crime. How do you want to do it? Do you want us to record?”
“Use me however you want,” she replied with a serious look on her face.
I know that look. She completely surrendered herself to me and trusted that I will do no wrong. So I took the charge by her permission.
“Are you into watersport?” I asked as I was looking to make things more interesting for her. She didn’t know what it was, so I told her, “Would you like to be peed on your face by me?”
“Okay, now I know what watersport is. I’ve seen a few of those videos,” she replied with a reserved laughter. “As I said, do whatever you want to do with me.”
I took her next to one of our grilled elevators when nobody was using them. I asked her to sit in a squat position facing towards me while stretching out her two arms holding the grills as if she is tied up. Before she did that, she pulled off my loose three-quarter pants that I wear at home after she noticed my erect pecker. She sat there on her knees staring at my 7 inches long fat brown dick. Then she took away her eyes from it and looked into mine. The expression in her eyes was something other than just lust. It felt like a connection between us that had no explanation. You can’t explain away the things we were doing and the emotions we were going through at that moment by merely categorizing them as either right or wrong, which is a very narrow way of looking at things.
Then she went back to the grill and took the position that I told her to be in. She took her phone and put it in the desired angle after turning on the camera to capture our acts of “taboo”.
I slapped her face with my hard dick for a few times. Then a never-ending streak of piss came flowing off my penis and hit her face at full speed. She gaped for a second. After stopping the piss halfway, an idea hit me.
As I was going to ask her starting with, “Would you like to..” when she cut me off and said, “Don’t ask me. Order me. I am at your disposal. I know you will do nothing wrong.”
Next, I commanded her to arch her ass upwards while sitting on her knee flat faced on the ground. So she did.
“Stretch your ass,” I ordered. So she did.
I emptied the rest of my bladder in her ass hole that she pushed out after I was done pissing in her.
She laughed and said that this was beyond her expectations. After that act, I picked up her mobile and went back inside. Right away, she started to ask me questions about any more ideas on exhibitionism. She and her parents were supposed to leave the next day, so I wanted to make the best of the situation we were in. By now, both of us were starting to understand each other at the same level. All the veils of hesitations and shame and guilt were burnt down. All that we were left with was a surging emotion of bonding through our “dirty” little secret.
I wanted to know if she was going to tell her boyfriend about what happened here.
She laughed and said “I don’t want to make him jealous. Besides, he seems a little hesitant and scared whenever I pick this topic to talk about. The way you understood me and treated me, I don’t think anyone can make me feel this way. At least not someone of my age.”
I was beginning to feel that she was looking up to me as some kind of a teacher when it came to kink and exhibitionism. Even I started to feel more comfortable in that role that night around her as I advised her to stay away from performing such nude dares with her boyfriend or someone else because the consequences could be ugly in the near future. “If you really need to fulfill your urge of recording yourself, then do it alone without letting your boyfriend know about it,” I said.
She understood what I meant. Before leaving the next day, she wanted to do one more dare with me and this time she wanted to take it even further by using the elevator to reach the terrace. So I formulated a plan for her to reach the terrace naked without getting caught by anyone.
After picking up a medium sized cucumber from the kitchen, I went to the top floor using the stairs to make sure nobody is about to use the elevators on any of the floors. When the coast was clear, I gave her a missed call to inform her that she can use the elevator now. After a few seconds, she got out of it covering herself with only a shawl with nothing underneath. Just when we stepped into the terrace, she dropped the shawl. I’m pretty sure the silhouette of her figure screamed nudity. It was a good thing that we were doing this during the winter when not a soul on our or any other nearby apartment’s terrace was present.
I took her to the highest point of our terrace from where the panoramic view of our city is quite stunning. I wanted to pick up her shawl from the ground but she asked not to. She really wanted to feel the rush to make her sweat in this winter night.
As were standing there admiring the panoramic night-lights from the top of our terrace in the pitch-dark night, she took my right hand and gave me a sign to grope her firm full breasts. The very next moment, I took off my pants, turned her around and started to rub my extended pecker against her butt crack while squeezing her busty teenage bosoms at the same time.
A silhouetted figure appeared on the terrace of an apartment not far from ours. I don’t think it noticed us but at this point, both of us were far more comfortable with each other in that place and she didn’t care a bit when I told her that maybe somebody’s watching us. She didn’t react to that. Instead, she kept rubbing her ass on my rock hard penis even more vigorously and moaning at the same time. Then she turned around and faced towards me. The act of rubbing herself against my body didn’t stop. This time she was rubbing her clits against my warm penis.
“It feels so warm,” she said as she quivered.
Now it looked like she was the one who wanted to take control because she wanted me to lie down on my back. As I followed what she said, the next moment she did exactly what I was thinking of. She wanted to be fucked very bad. She sat over my things and kept rubbing her clits against my dick. Seemed like she didn’t want this opportunity to go to waste as she wanted to achieve every one of her fantasies in one single night.
Suddenly, she changed her pose a bit and was trying to insert my dick into her vagina. As soon as I realized this, I pulled her hand away from my dick before she could fulfill her desire of getting fucked by me.
Although I couldn’t see her eyes clearly in the dark, still I could sense that I was looking right into hers when I said, “Stop. Be careful what you wish for.”
She remained still for ten seconds after which she laid herself down on my chest. Every part of her nude body was in parallel with mine. We were feeling cold and hot at the same time as we lied cuddling each other. She was still rubbing her lower body against mine. After laying silent for at least one whole minute, I said, “I think we should leave now.” She agreed. But instead of going back home, we strolled around the terrace naked for five more minutes without any fear of getting caught. I took this opportunity to ask her, “You said you didn’t want anybody to have sex with you before marriage. Why were you breaking that resolution tonight with me then?”
She replied in almost a whisper, “Sorry. I thought you would like it. I’m sorry if I made you angry.”
“I am not angry at all. And you were right. I would’ve like it without a doubt. But I really want you to stick with that resolution of yours. Us getting strayed in our weakest moment of lust will make things complicated for both of us and our family,” I replied with a logical perspective.
Then she reminded me of the cucumber that I brought.
I told her of my intention, “Yes, thanks for reminding me. Now turn around if you want some more excitement.”
We lathered up the cucumber by spitting on it. In between, we also spat on each other for fun and . In the next couple of minutes, the cucumber was halfway up her ass. I stopped at the point when it felt like she was about to scream in pain. Then I asked her to wrap up her shawl so we can go back to the elevator. But she had something more challenging in her mind. With half of the cucumber hanging out of her rear hole, she surveilled the situation and walked down the stairs for whole five floors from the terrace. I didn’t want to make her feel lonely in this endeavor. So when she asked me if I’m accompanying her naked, I agreed.
She took a look at my hard erect penis and smiled with an expression in her eyes that reflected lust of the highest degree. Then with the following words, she took my breath away, “Wish you were the first one to take my virginity away before anyone else does.”
“We are cousins. Did you forget that?” I replied, to which she immediately answered, “What we did tonight, do you think cousins are supposed to do that? From now on, we are more than just cousins. I hope you realize that.”
I was taken aback by her matured reply.
We didn’t say a word to each other while cautiously stepping down the stairs. She kept holding my erect penis all the way home as if trying to have some sort of communication with it. She said it’s because it kept her hand warm. Fair enough.
As we about to enter the house, I reminded her of the shawl that she left upstairs. She wasn’t having enough of this dare night. Now she wanted to wrap that handkerchief to cover her bottom as she did before and go to the terrace again. At this moment, she was taking this dare for granted because the first time we did it, there was no interference to stop our “taboo” adventure.
Before leaving the house one more time, I felt it would be way more sexier if her waistcloth that barely covered her clits was wet and is sticking to her thighs. She concurred, while showing some appreciation for my idea. So I asked her to sit on her knees in the bathroom as I was about to pour water over her. But she wanted to get pissed all over again instead. I was glad that I drank almost a litre of water after pissing on her the first time. So I fulfilled her desire of getting pissed on once again. She had toilet stench all over her hair and body but she didn’t mind. Seemed like she was savoring every moment of it.
I was holding the selfie stick with her phone as I climbed up the stairs behind her recording those plump butts moving from side to side. She was topless and was carrying a medium-sized notebook to cover her chest in case someone abruptly appeared from his or her house. As it happened, four kids (one boy and three girls) came out running from a house that was just below the terrace. They were no older than third graders. I was fully clothed this time around. She instantly covered the breasts with the notebook and appeared flustered. When she realized they were just kids and there wasn’t any guardian with them, she pulled down the notebook that was covering her top and casually revealed her breasts. She kept going to give out the impression to the kids that nothing vulgar is happening and that it’s normal for her to roam around in those clothes. Thankfully, no adult was accompanying those kids, or else it would’ve been a disaster. The kids were staring up at her as she climbed the final stairs above that floor. I wasn’t expecting her to do what she did the very next second. She pulled whatever tiny length of the handkerchief that kept her ass scantily cladded, further up to completely expose her butts to them and me. They chuckled at this view but carried on with their business of playful childhood. We were left alone.
After finding the shawl, she asked me to get completely nude with her before getting back home. So I took off all of my clothes and carried them with us as we started to descend. This time, there was no one to disturb us. After reaching home, we took a nice warm bath under the shower, stroking and caressing each other’s genitalia while cuddling and rubbing against each other after every few seconds under the shower.
While slowly stroking my penis, she said “You should take my fishnet top and the G-string panty and hide them somewhere for the next time when I’ll be here”.
“I’ll do that”, I replied.
Seeing her stroking my dick, I asked her, “Do you know what comes out of the penis when it’s too hard and you keep jerking it off?”
She looked into my eyes and with a wide smile she replied, “I do.”
“How? Through online porn or your boyfriend?” I asked.
“From porn of course. I never did anything like this with my boyfriend”, she replied honestly.
After getting very excited at this reply, I wanted to know her mind. So I asked, “Do you want to take my load into your mouth?”
“Do you want me to swallow it?” she enquired appearing delighted that I’ve asked her this question.
I replied while trying not to violate her space and go against her wishes, “Only if you want to. I don’t think you’ll like its smell though.”
“If you ask me to, I will swallow it all. Promise,” she replied like a submissive whore.
“It’s okay. I’m not going to eject my load on you,” I replied after stilling my senses; a reply that seemed to have made her sad. “Do you want to take it into your mouth?” I asked knowing well what she might answer.
Without saying a word, she hurriedly started to swallow my dick. It took me by surprise. By looking at the way she was going at it, I asked her, “This isn’t your first time, is it?”
She stopped, looked at me while grabbing my thighs and said, “I swear, this is my first dick ever, and I’m glad that it’s yours and not my boyfriend’s.”
I’ve let her swallow my penis for a while longer without ejaculating on her.
After she was done swallowing, she made her mind known to me, “It would’ve been great if I could take your entire load on my face and in my mouth. It would’ve been the perfect ending of a perfect night for me.”
I assured her that she would get her wish fulfilled when she will be here the next time, “I promise to satisfy your desire the next time you’ll be here. I haven’t ejaculated for six months now, and the next time you’ll be here, it will be over a year and a half. Totally sufficient to not just fill your mouth with it, but also the entire hole of your ass. Trust me on this one.”
“I trust you,” she acknowledged.
We dried each other’s body with the same towel. Then we went back to the corridor of our floor and sat on the stairs again. This time without a shred of clothing on us. We were cold and the hair on our body were standing up, but the close proximity of our bodies kept us somewhat warm. Her right hand was caressing my dick that stayed erect the entire time of our adventure and I had my left arm around her shoulders.
“It’s time we got dressed. They aren’t far from home now,” I reminded her of our situation.
“Sadly, yes,” she replied sounding dejected.
I tried to cheer her up by proposing one final dare. She seemed elated. I asked her if she’ll be okay to expose her body parts in front of those same four kids again. She had no problem with that. After hearing the idea, she couldn’t wait for the kids to get on the elevator again.
I went to the ground floor and waited for the kids to get into the elevator after finishing their sports. My cousin was eagerly waiting for my instructions. The kids and I stepped into the elevator. They were going to the seventh floor while I lived on third. So I stopped the elevator on third floor where she was waiting to board it. When she entered, the chattering inside stopped in an instant. I suppose it was because of the way she was dressed.
Her nipples were covered by a pair of black tapes sticking in X shape. Her G-string was shoved up her ass halfway through and the other half was sticking out of her hole just the way it was when she tried it for the first time in school. As for the pussy part, that too was covered in black tape, just enough to hide it from plain view. After the kids stepped out of the elevator, a girl kid couldn’t hide her curiosity and asked her, “Why are you naked?”
My cousin replied calmly with a smile as if she already knew what she had to say if asked by anyone, “My private parts are covered. I’m not naked. Besides, I’m performing a play that requires me to dress this way. I really like my outfit. Do you?”
The kid replied with a grin on her face, “I like it too, but I don’t think my parents will allow me to go out like this.” Then they stepped out of the elevator along with us without any further queries. The kids saw me filming her. So I told them that I’m her cameraman. Every actress needs a cameraman.
“Yeah you’re right,” the kid replied.
So we descended the stairs for the second time within an hour. This time, only one of us was naked, or rather semi-naked if you consider covering the genitalia with tapes and G-string shoved up your ass as some kind of dressing.
After getting into the house, she couldn’t stop herself from rubbing against my dick again. So I grabbed her from behind and spanked hard the first time. She screamed a little and then said, “Keep going. I’m okay.”
So I slapped again with the same force. This time there was no screaming. Only a little moaning. After the third time, she asked me to slap harder.
I was rubbing my penis against her butt crack and spanking harder than ever at the same time. Suddenly, she turned around, faced towards me and kept pushing herself against my body with these words, “Use me! I want you to show me everything you can do to me. Fuck me! Please fuck me!”
The next moment, she dropped on her knees and starting swallowing like a girl possessed. Then she stopped after a minute or so, looked up at me with helpless eyes and said, “I am your slut. Use me whenever and however you like. I am always available for you.”
“I know you are. But we have to wait until next time. I hope you understand why I’m saying this,” I replied while trying to calm down her sense of lust.
She got up on her feet, looked me in the eyes and said with a faint smile, “I understand. Until next time brother.”

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